Freitag, 21. November 2008

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Country/city life

We life in a time were the most people move into the cities and hope to find a job or a better life than on the country. On the other hand the elder people, who live in town, complain about the stressful life and want to enjoy the peaceful life on country. What are the pro and cons of city and country life?

Primarily the advantage of city life is that you have a great choice, doesn’t matter if you are in the bakery, in the supermarket or by barber shops. That makes the life faster. You can reach everything you want in a few minutes, that’s good, but also the reason for the stress everyone is talking about. For younger sociable people the parties, the smoky air and the speedy life are no problem, but the pensioners for example have difficulties and spend all the time in their apartment. And the only time the city is reasonably calm you can’t spend the time outside, because of the violence in different areas.

On country life people have to accept more corporal work ass well as the investigation of more time for daily things like shopping. That poses a huge problem especially for older and single persons and makes the life burdensome. However, many people agree to the hard terms so that they can enjoy the fresh air and the wonderful scenery.

In my opinion the city offers more attractions for young people like me. I never lived in a city and would like to experience the life there. If I’m older I will prefer a house in a quiet and peaceful area, but in near future I want to discover the world and therefore I will travel to Vienna.

Altogether it’s a matter of opinion where you want to live. Everybody has his own advantages and disadvantages which he/she ought to use. But consider, anything what counts is that you are happy!

1 Kommentar:

Guenter hat gesagt…

grammar: most people (no article); it makes life easier (no article);

expression: in the city (in the country, in the street); the elderly people; "auf dem Land" - in the country; "Primarily the advantage of city life is that you have a great choice, doesn’t matter if you are in the bakery, in the supermarket or by barber shops." ('no matter if' ... many mistakes in this sentence!); "On country life people have to accept more corporal work ass well as the investigation of more time for daily things like shopping." (grave mistakes in this sentence); "However, many people agree to the hard terms so that they can enjoy the fresh air and the wonderful scenery."; When I'm older ... (not 'if'); "Everybody has his own advantages and disadvantages which he/she ought to use. But consider, anything what counts is that you are happy!" C??

The basic structure is ok, but you don't have many ideas and you make grave expression mistakes. You should be much more careful when you write something.